Terrible Poetry Contest: Senryu

Sayonara…
Under rubber treads
Grey fur mangled and matted
Roadkill rat squashed flat

Published by Ruth

Susan Zutautas says:

April 4, 2020 at 9:23 pm

LOL, love it 🙂

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1. Ruth says:
  
  April 5, 2020 at 7:59 am
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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RuthScribbles says:

April 4, 2020 at 10:18 pm

Oh my!! 😮 terrible indeed

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1. Ruth says:
  
  April 5, 2020 at 8:00 am
  
  Tasteless more than terrrible, I suppose, because the syllable count works and it reads properly 🙂
  
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  1. RuthScribbles says:
    
    April 5, 2020 at 2:27 pm
    
    Yes!!
    
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  2. Ruth says:
    
    April 5, 2020 at 3:16 pm
    
    Sorry, I’m a born and bred country girl so roadkill is an inevitable fact of life for me 😦
    
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  3. RuthScribbles says:
    
    April 5, 2020 at 3:22 pm
    
    Well I liked your senryu
    
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  4. Ruth says:
    
    April 5, 2020 at 5:45 pm
    
    🙂
    
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Elaine says:

April 5, 2020 at 8:02 am

😳😬😩🤣

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Chelsea Owens says:

April 11, 2020 at 5:42 am

😀 Short, sweet -oh, wait. No, not sweet. 😀

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1. Ruth says:
  
  April 11, 2020 at 7:21 am
  
  Thank you! 🙂
  
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